2007年10月20日 星期六
Writing assignment~All nasty things of being students
It’s not always fun as a student. It comes with lots of responsibilities for being a student. There are many school rules you have to follow. For example, students are required to attend the Semester Opening Ceremony for no reason, and are forced to listen to some administrators’ meaningless speech. Also, students have no right to choose all the subjects, and some of them are truly useless. Endless assignments are another nightmare for each student. Sometimes students have to stay up just to finish the assignments on time. The ultimate torture for students is all the tests, pop quizzes, midterm, final. You could probably get flunked if you failed in the tests. If there are alternations, will you choose to be a student?
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Hi, Yijia
Well done! You have many strong supporting ideas to back up your main point. It seems being a studnet is a terrible experience. Think on the bright side: after you have the degree, you will have a better salary, a better job, and maybe you will make some good friends in these two years. You will graduate and leave school one day, but I will never leave the school!
Being a student usually coming with lots of responsibilities.
-->what is the verb of this sentence? come? why do you choose the gerund form?
-->can you try to rephrase this part?
-->'such as' is usually followed by nouns. If you want to add clauses, why not try 'for example'.
--> ...follow, for example, students are...
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